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Fiction
Piggie Pie
Published in Unknown Binding by Perfection Learning Prebound (1997-09)
Author: Margie Palatini
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Great Kids Book
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Review Date: 2007-12-29
This is one of my favorite children's book and I love to give it as a gift.
As a Kindergarten teacher it is my pick!

family favorite
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Review Date: 2007-11-30
My family loves this book. My husband reads it to my children, ages 13, 5, and 1. They love it, he does the voices of the characters, which is great fun for everyone. My oldest says this is her favorite book from when she was little. I'm buying copies for my toddler aged neice and nephew.

Great read aloud fun!
Helpful Votes: 1 out of 1 total.
Review Date: 2007-10-06
Gritch the Witch was pining for some special snacks. Piggie Pie is all that would do! The problem was the main ingredient was 8 plump piggies and she had none at hand. Off to Old MacDonald's farm on her broom to find them, to no avail!

Howard Fine's great illustrations of all the piggies disguised as other animals and even Old MacDonald, himself, will make young children laugh out loud! This book is lots of fun and will be requested over and over again. And, there's plenty of sly humor that adults will tremendously enjoy.

This is a great book for kids 5 and up.

Piggie Pie! A read great for all ages!
Helpful Votes: 2 out of 2 total.
Review Date: 2008-04-22
This fractured folktale is about a witch that is craving some `Piggie Pie.' She goes through her pantry and finds she has everything she needs except for that all important ingredient--PIGGIES! At first she is outraged but eventually composes herself and devises a plan. Where can she find a piggy? The zoo? The circus? She finally decides that the best place to secure some pigs would be on a farm. After looking through the yellow pages, she travels to Old MacDonald's farm to grab the missing ingredient. She gives her victims a warning as she writes in the clouds, "Surrender Piggies!" The pigs devise their own plan; they plot to outsmart the witch by dressing up as other farm animals. They fool her by disguising themselves as ducks, cows, chickens, and even old MacDonald. When the big bad wolf happens to come along, he offers advice to the witch and tells her to give up--after all, he remembers those 3 pig brothers! Now, her taste changes from piggie to wolf and she graciously invites him over for `lunch'...
Piggie Pie is a delightful story that incorporates several classic folktales including The Three Little Pigs, Old MacDonald nursery rhyme, the traditional evil witch as the villain, and the famous three little pigs. Due to the structure of this book, students will improve their understanding of the different subcategories of traditional literature. The author includes descriptive language such as repetition, alliteration, expressive language, and affective adjectives that highlight the text and bring the story to life. Such examples include the witch describing her tasty meal options with phrases like "boiled, black, buzzed feet" and "plump, juicy, pink piggies." This whimsical, witty story will capture student's attention and can be used as a model to enhance their understanding of what it means to read like a writer.
Throughout the book, Palatini's text enhances student's vocabulary and contains repetitive phonemes that enrich their growth as a reader. As Cunningham describes, tongue twisters, like ones found in the text, play a crucial role in developing students' phonemic awareness. For example, "eight plump piggies for piggie pie" is a silly and fun phrase that the students will enjoy saying and simultaneously will develop their oral language. Students will be exposed to new vocabulary words, such as curdle, passel, and muttered. Encourage students to use elements of Palatini's writing and transfer her techniques over when creating their own literature.

4th graders love Palatini
Helpful Votes: 2 out of 2 total.
Review Date: 2007-02-02
Though Palatini's books are billed as read-alouds for a younger audience, my fourth graders can't get enough! The books are simple enough for even my lowest readers to tackle independently, yet clever enough that my high readers choose them as well. The humor appeals to all ages. In fact, there are many things my kids "get" that younger children don't. My students recommend Palatini books to each other all the time, and I can't keep them on my shelves. I am on my third copy of Piggie Pie and currently need to replace my worn-out copy of Moosetache. They've simply been "read to death". There is no higher praise for a children's book!

Fiction
Samarkand
Published in Hardcover by Abacus (UK) (1994-01)
Author: Amin Maalouf
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not perfect, but lovely.
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Review Date: 2008-07-06
Samarkand tells the story of Omar Khayyam and the writing of his Rubaiyaat. It crosses that biographical story with the story of an American scholar who discovers the real book later, in the midst of a journey to the Middle East.

Samarkand breaks nearly every rule that I have for myself about what kind of historical fiction I dislike. It name-drops famous people (characters sail on the Titanic. Khayyam is close to Hassan-i-Sabah and their stories intertwine, etc.). It makes historical characters modern. It indulges in fancy dress and exotic places. But still, that didn't really bother me. Perhaps that is because in the character of the student it seems Maalouf turns the camera back on himself. By giving a young, well-intentioned but ultimately callow character the role to interpret not only the past but the culture of the present, the reader is reminded that such things can not be so easily understood. Maalouf seems to remind us that their is no such thing as an omniscient narrative. And then somehow, just like that, I forgive him the rest of the devices in his book.

Samarkand is not perfect. The latter half, in particular is a little bit clunky. There is something not quite right about the structure. It may be the translation, but I am not completely sure. Still, a worthwhile read. A good use of time. (And now I have to run out and re-read the Rubaiyaat, which I will confess I did not take as seriously as I ought.)

This is the second book that I have read by Maalouf, the first being the magnificent Crusade Through Arab Eyes. I'm definitely going to keep reading in his body of work.

Thought Provoking
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Review Date: 2008-04-21
I only picked up the book because of FitzGerald's Rubaiyat and was happily surprised. The only two observations I would add to other reviews here are, first, that the novel was translated from French into English and so may lose some elegance and effect. Perhaps that's the origin of someone's remark, "surprisingly dry"? Second, I enjoyed the way the fictionalized characters were drawn from actual history, Medieval and modern, and how characters in the early history had thought provoking parallels in the modern story. So, I came away moved by the question of how different types of people influence history, or art, or the people around them. And the story opens a door into Persian history, including Islam, for those of us in the West who had little or no idea of it before.

Historical fiction about Persian history and literature - outstanding
Helpful Votes: 10 out of 10 total.
Review Date: 2006-05-29
This is a translation of a novel written in French by the Lebanese author Amin Maalouf. This novel is, in fact, two loosely linked stories tied together by the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam. For those who are unaware of what this is, the Rubaiyat are a series of quatrains (four line poems) written in the 11th century in Persia. They are poems about life, love, women, and destiny which I would say they are comparable in some sense to the Odes of Horace (for those more familiar with Roman literature). These quatrains were supposedly lost for several centuries, rediscovered in the 19th century, and ultimately became enormously popular both in Persia (Iran) and the West. It is doubtful that Omar Khayyam wrote all of the collection, it is believed that some have been added in subsequent centuries. I found it useful to read some of the quatrains as I was reading this novel.

The first part of this novel is a fictionalized account of Omar Khayyam's life. I am not an expert, and I don't know how much is truly historical and how much is fictionalized, but this is both an informative and entertaining story. Khayyam befriends the head of a strict Muslim sect who founds the Assassins. This is also a tragic love story. This is primarily a political and romantic adventure describing the events surrounding Omar Khayyam as he writes his Rubaiyat.

The second part of the novel takes place in the late 19th and early 20th century as the Rubaiyat is uncoverd after centuries of hiding. A young man becomes obsessed with obtaining an original copy of the Rubaiyat, and ultimately gets swept into the Persian Constitutional Revolution of the early 20th century. As before, the story is primarily political and romantic in nature. It is interesting that the Persians (Iranians) of the early 20th century viewed the United States as the best example of democracy and freedom. I wonder if they feel the same today?

Like much of the writing of Maalouf, the main characters in the two stories don't fully participate/belong in the societies in which they are living. This gives them a unique perspective from which to evaluate the culture and the society around them. This novel is a great balance of compelling tales, tragic loves stories, and fascinating historical fiction, combined with the unique perspective that Mr. Maalouf writes with. This is a beautiful novel that I highly recommend.

Invoking a deep respect for Iran, Islam,democracy and Justice
Helpful Votes: 2 out of 2 total.
Review Date: 2007-08-04
This is easily Maaloufs best work. Totally different from all other writers, Maalouf never polarises. He writes with fine balance and invokes a deep respect for every culture and creed he writes of. No one , having read this, will finish it without having a deep understanding and respect for Iran and its people, its brutal history , its identity ,which it has had very little chance in creating due to constant invasions-Turks to Mongols- or tutelege-Britain and Tsarist Russia.
Using the verses of Omar Kayyams Samarkand Manuscript and the turn of the century constitutional and democratic revolts and its failure due to British and Russian interference (what would we give for the democratic Iranian state today-free of religious and political tyranny?!) Maalouf weaves a wonderful tale of -appropriately-Arabian Nights proportions and educates the reader on all the historical upheavals desires and missed opportunities of the region. The book divides into two main parts; 11th century Persia and the life of Kayyam, and the late 19th and early 20th century Persia; a nation trying to establish itself in the world.
A deep lesson lies here, of the importance of democracy freedom and justice to all people, and how fragile it is against vested interests.
This is a truly great novel. A wonderfully unifying novel that lifts the prejudices and fears between the east and west, and misconceptions of Iran and islamic cultures.
A masterpiece in humanitarian understanding.

A parable for our times
Helpful Votes: 6 out of 6 total.
Review Date: 2006-09-01
Other reviewers have highlighted the charm of the book, with its evocation of Khayyam, the Rubiyyat and the fabled cities of the Silk Route. I would like to point out that it holds a frightening parallel to our present times. The book was published in 1988, so Maalouf could have had no idea how closely his book would mirror the early part of the twenty first century.

The book deals partly with the confict between the hidden leader of a violent sect and powerful empire. The second part of the book deals with the citizens of a country (ironically, today's Iran) striving for democracy and freedom from the oppressive rule of theocrats, but opposed by two great world powers of the time (Britain and Russia!) who wish to maintain the status quo for their economic benefit.

The book is written with great charm and makes the reader feel (s)he is there. Like a previous reviewer, I do not know enough to separate fact from fiction, but at the end of the book, one wishes with all one's heart that there IS such a book, written in Omar Khayyam's own hand, and that it is NOT at the bottom of the Atlantic.

An amazing and uplifting book.

Fiction
Spring Snow
Published in Paperback by Vintage (1990-04-14)
Author: Yukio Mishima
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Spring Snow
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Review Date: 2007-12-08
Japan. 1912. Japanese society is divided, or at least complex. Still with most of it's body and soul in the ancient tradition of the East, but with ever increasing impulses towards the "Western culture" (In the unsemitically correct reality, we of the "West" have infinitely more in common with the traditional culture of the East than we do the current world-wide Weimar Republic, but oh well). Mishima, the author, was more or less a Japanese representative of the "conservative revolution", and appears to have been quite well read. His life reminds me in many ways of Corneliu Codreanu and Julius Evola. His well-known dramatic ritual suicide as a protest against the betrayal of tradition in Japan, and the Japanese submission to American rule, followed him and his radical "right wing" organization's (The Shield Society) failure to arouse the Japanese Defence Force into rebelling.

The book is the first in a tetralogy, and follows Kiyoaki Matsugae, a young student from a family of the lower nobility in his relationship with Satoko Ayakura, the daughter of one of the 28 families of the higher nobility, her being the daughter of a count. The book in many ways actually reminded me of the excellent "Victoria" by Knut Hamsun, with the constant back and forth in the interaction between the characters, sometimes they love each other dearly, and at other times torment each other. Such is the nature of difficult relationships, I guess! The book paints a very vivid picture of the end of a noble era, and the translation I read was excellently done. The moral teaching of this period, and it's sometimes less noble effects is excellently portrayed.

Through certain misunderstandings, Satoko ends up being future wife of one of the royal princes, and Kiyoaki is driven to despair. Long story short, as all the books in the series, there is no happy ending, but that is basically the ending of all our lives. This is a book I highly recommend, and apart from a few minor flaws, it is all in all an excellent tale, and I look very much forward to reading the rest of the series. 4,5 stars.

(I read a different edition)

Boring and maudlin
Helpful Votes: 0 out of 11 total.
Review Date: 2007-10-08
Maybe it was a bad transalation. Maybe I could not relate as a westerner to an old Japanese story, but I really did not enjoy this book. It was maudlin and unbelievable. Story was boring. Character development was terrible and it was poorly written/transalated. I recommend Murakami's Norwegian Wood for those who want to read books by Japanese authors.

the beauty and destructive power of all-consuming love
Helpful Votes: 1 out of 1 total.
Review Date: 2007-07-23
Mishima's Spring Snow is a coming-of-age tale for nouveau riche Kiyoaki, whose naive childhood crush on the more mature Satoko grows into something much more powerful, beautiful and, ultimately, destructive. Kiyoaki's failings are human and familiar; acting on rash impulses, immaturity, a failure to realise what he wants till he has lost it. Mishima's characterisation is finely drawn and accurate. The scheming Tadeshina turns out to have her own secret heartbreak, enervated Ayakura lacks guile but not luck, the ancient loyalties of the Abessess make her a formidable eminence grice. The characters are at once individually drawn and representative of a unique and fascinating era of flux and change in Japan, as ancient modes of behaviour gave way to modernising forces. Mishima's novel is both of its time and timeless. A true masterpiece.

First Novel of Mishima's Masterpiece
Helpful Votes: 3 out of 3 total.
Review Date: 2007-07-01

Just finished reading an excellent book, just a few minutes ago, and I feel compelled to write a review, while ideas are still fresh in my mind.

This is the first book I've finished reading for my Summer Reading. The book is called Snow Spring (Haru no Yuki) by Mishima Yukio and its the first book in his masterpiece, The Sea of Fertility or Hojou no Umi. The Sea of Fertility is a series of four novels by one of Japan's greatest authors. The book I have is the Vintage International edition, translated by Michael Gallagher.

This novel really moved me. In the last 100 pages, I couldn't do anything but finish it. Just like a short story by Edgar Allan Poe, where the reader hangs onto every word until the truth and mystery is finally revealed in the last word, so does this novel grip the reader.

On the surface is a conventional tale of the Japanese idea of unrequited love, a theme that is done over and over again in Japanese fiction. What sets this piece apart from others, is Mishima narrative drive and richly detailed characters and the psychological insight into every major and minor character involved.

Kiyoaki begins his ill fated relationship with the beautiful Satoko, whom he has known all his life. At first he disregards her and then he is on fire to obtain her love after she is engaged to a Prince. Wealthy families are invovled in making the Wedding ceremony a success and any type of scandal leaking out to the press must be avoided at all costs. But Kioyaki single minded determination to pursure Satoko, despite such obstacles, causes the reader to want him to succeed.

On the one hand, Kiyoaki lets his desires and emotions rage out of control and on the other all those emotions put him into action. He used to sit around in his room all day, lonely and depressed, until he just decided to pusure love. Its his drive to obtain love and his selfish quest for Satoko's heavenly beauty that pushes him along page after page. These type of overly romantic novels can quickly turn unwittingly comical in lesser writer. But Mishima combines the richness of Japanese traditional and culture with romantic ideas of love and realistic views, based in concrete reality, that prevent the work from becoming a low form of soap opera.

The novel is both realistic novel and emotional charged romantic that causes the entire work to be a cleverly crafted paradox. For example, Honda is Kiyoaki's best friend in high school. Honda has a revelation that he must prevent Kiyoaki from pursuing Satoko becomes of his friend's harmful obession. The fact that Honda can't bring himself to hurt his friend by giving him a cold rational arguement, shows love between friends that isn't distorted by irrational love. Kiyoaki's love for Satoko is more based on his own selfish fantasy. It is this fantastic love that wins out between Satoko and over Honda, who had good intentions but failed to act on them. Irrational love wins out over the gloom of reality.

Without giving away any more of the story, let me just end with how this book took over my imagination and wouldn't let it go for 2 whole days. All day Saturday and all Sunday afternoon, I cared more about the characters in this story then my own family. I couldn't do anything else except finish reading it.

It starts out slow but builds to a breakneck speed in the end. It is highly recommended for anyone who wants to read an excellent novel this Summer. Forget about it being Japanese and look past all that exoticism and you will see the novel for all its beauty.

Today I will start on the second novel in the series, called Runaway Horses.

I can't wait.

Landscapes -- Interior and Exterior
Helpful Votes: 4 out of 4 total.
Review Date: 2007-03-06
In "Spring Snow," Yukio Mishima has chosen the perfect title for his novel. The narrative is as gentle and as beautiful as wet snow on spring blossoms, and indeed there is a poignant scene where two lovers have a tryst in a rickshaw under such conditions. It was my first foray into the world of Mishima -- indeed, of Japanese literature -- and will not be my last.

The story of a young and handsome aristocrat, Kiyoaki Matsugae, and the beautiful and mysterious Ayakura Satoko, comes from the same time-honored tradition of as more familiar star-crossed lovers such as Romeo and Juliet, Pyramus and Thisbe, Tristan and Isolde, and Lancelot and Guinevere. Set just after the Russo-Japanese War in the early 20th century, the novel offers intriguing insights into a Japanese culture that is at once in flux and clinging to traditions.

If you love a writer whose strength is description of nature, Mishima is not to be missed. His words are as fit as any Nature Channel special on the wonders of Japan and he is equally adept at describing the contours of his young lovers' bodies. In addition to the sensual and sensuous wonders, the inner psychology of passion-plagued minds is a point of expertise for this writer. He deftly avoids sentimentalism while walking the thin line between hatred and love, between passion and pain.

Symbolism, description, psychology, and a gentle narrative pace. What's not to love? Readers looking for a fast-paced plot might not be overwhelmed, but those who love it when they stumble upon a "writer's writer" will be glad they tried Yukio Mishima. It is the first book of the tetralogy, "The Sea of Fertility."

Fiction
The Summer Guest
Published in Paperback by Dial Press Trade Paperback (2005-05-31)
Author: Justin Cronin
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This is just a wonderful book.
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Review Date: 2007-09-19
Reading is one of my greatest pleasures and a friend who knows this gave me "The Summer Guest". I was not familiar with the author and didn't know anything about the book before I began. I have since recommended this book to all of my friends. It is truly one of the best books I've read and I am a voracious reader. The language is absolutely beautiful and the characterizations are wonderful. It is a book to savor and, although I rarely reread books, I will definitely read this one again.

John Citron's review from March 24, 2006 says it all. If you are in doubt about whether to purchase "The Summer Guest", do it anyway. You will not be disappointed.

Wonderful book.
Helpful Votes: 1 out of 1 total.
Review Date: 2007-04-04
Really ... absolutely wonderful. Captivating. I couldn't stop reading and I was very sorry when it was over. I look forward to reading more from Mr. Cronin.

Many summers, many guests
Helpful Votes: 2 out of 2 total.
Review Date: 2007-03-25
Justin Cronin writes beutifully! He weaves characters, their stories, big life questions, and time into something
larger than the norm, leaving this reader pondering my own life, family and sense of place. Cronin's Mary and O'Neill was rich, too. Bits of metaphor and vividness in both.

Luminous Prose...
Helpful Votes: 2 out of 2 total.
Review Date: 2006-08-08
Justin Cronin has written an exceptionally beautiful novel- filled with scenes and characterizations that seem real to the touch. Even if you have not lived in the Adirondack mountains of New York state as I have, the summers of deep woods and deep lakes come alive on the pages. The story of lives and losses is tenderly recounted...luminous prose.

This is a rare gem!
Helpful Votes: 4 out of 4 total.
Review Date: 2006-04-05
I have told almost everyone I know to read this book! It is magnificently written. There is a truly memorable page in the book that made me cry as Mr. Cronin describes "man's best friend." I really loved that he told the story from the various characters point of view. I didn't want the book to end and have been hoping that Mr. Cronin will have a new book out by 2007. I am glad that he doesn't churn out books 3 times a year, it makes it that much more special when his next one comes and that we all have something to look forward to.

Fiction
Team Yankee
Published in Paperback by Berkley (1988-09-01)
Author: Harold Coyle
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One of the best war novels out there
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Review Date: 2007-03-12
Team Yankee is quite an interesting book. Harold Coyle describes a war between the Warsaw Pact and NATO in 1985 in great detail. But don't expect this to be like Red Storm Rising, this book focuses entirely on small unit tactics with zero politics. The action starts immediately at the beginning of the second chapter, and it never stops.

The battles are realistic and the tactics are described in great detail in the text as well as the maps that are in the book. The maps really help you figure what's going on and what platoons are moving where, etc.

The story focuses on Captain Sean Bannon of Team Yankee, a military unit deployed in Germany during the Cold War. When war breaks out in 1985, he must lead his unit to victory. There are several other main characters including several other tankers, and an infantry sergeant. This is definetly a book you don't want to miss.

If you want to know what armored battle is like, and not have to dodge shells, just read this book.
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Review Date: 2007-01-09
This book is, IMHO, the finest of the cold-war era military novels, and one of the finest military novels ever written, includng the writing of Patrick O'Brian and C.S. Forester.

The only book that can compare is Clancy's "Hunt for Red October", and it does not give as good a feeling as being there as does Team Yankee.

If you like military novels, or just good writing, read this book.

A good read, but...
Helpful Votes: 1 out of 4 total.
Review Date: 2004-05-24
This was the second Coyle book I read (the first being "God's Children") and once again I was compelled by his gripping battle scenes and poignant view of today's combat environment. The story flows well and was generally enjoyable and engaging.

However, by the end of the book I became disappointed because of the constant, repeated stupidity of the opposing forces. I felt cheated because it never seemed that the U.S. forces won due to good strategy & tactics as much as because the enemy used tactics a learned high school student would shun. Don't get me wrong, the book is a good read. I only wish Coyle would create an antagonist with some brains to serve as a challenging foil for our heroes.

Yamabushi's mini reviews pt. VII
Helpful Votes: 3 out of 4 total.
Review Date: 2007-02-03
Setting aside all the geo-political baggage of the day, Coyle finds his real strength with one tank platoons story in WW III. It's a shame he never went back to this style. A real shame, as this is terrific, exciting stuff you wont find else where.

Coyle makes impressive authorial debut with Team Yankee
Helpful Votes: 9 out of 11 total.
Review Date: 2004-08-23
Harold Coyle's Team Yankee: A Novel of World War III (Presidio Press, 1987) was published a year after Red Storm Rising's triumphant debut in hardcover, and although it is thematically similar (Soviet forces invade West Germany after a series of crises escalate into an all out conventional war), Coyle's approach is very different from Clancy's. Instead of creating his own possible scenario for a NATO vs. Warsaw Pact confrontation, he asked for, and received, permission from British author (and retired General) Sir John Hackett to set Team Yankee within the scenario created in Hackett's two
"speculative fiction" books The Third World War: August 1985 and The Third World War: The Untold Story.

Team Yankee takes place within a two-week period in an August in the late 1980s. Since late July, a series of crises precipitated by the Iran-Iraq war has morphed into a clash between U.S. and Soviet naval forces in the Persian Gulf region. By August 1, word comes that NATO is mobilizing and ordering their armed forces, including Bannon and Team Yankee, to their wartime positions. Soon, the Soviets and their Warsaw Pact "allies" cross the Inner German Border in force. Team Yankee and the rest of NATO's forces in West Germany must then fight the invaders and stop them before the Red Army reaches the Rhine River. After that, assuming the Soviet attack bogs down, the mission will change from merely defending territory to taking offensive operations and pushing the invaders back. The question Coyle poses is, can American soldiers, using their weapons and tactics against superior numbers of Soviet and Warsaw Pact soldiers, defeat Russian weapons and tactics?

Readers familiar with Hackett's macrocosmic World War III will know the big picture, but first-time readers will be turning the pages to see who wins, who loses, who dies...and who survives in this outstanding first novel by a true master of the military fiction genre.

The only flaw, and this is not Coyle's fault, is that reality -- in the shape of the fall of communism and the end of the Cold War -- has made the novel's setting extremely outdated. Some of the then-modern weapons, such as the M1 main battle tank, have been since updated to M1-A2 standard, older weapons have been retired, and obviously there's no more Warsaw Pact.


All in all, it's an entertaining read.

Fiction
Techniques of the Selling Writer
Published in Paperback by University of Oklahoma Press (1982-05)
Author: Dwight V. Swain
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Dated but still good
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Review Date: 2008-07-18
This is a good one. It's written in an encouraging tone, it's entertaining, and it's full of good advice. The age is showing a little (women are either ditzy blonds or housewives who spend their husband's money on mink coats) but that just gives the book a certain charm.

It doesn't extensively cover the whole topic, this is not one and all book. It gives you the basic tools on how to create conflict, characters, and structure, but you should still check other books for tips on editing and style.

This was one of the first books I read on the subject (I've since read several others) and it really helped me to structure my writing better, consider POW, and the character goals. The friendly, supportive tone was very important, this book boosted my confidence and my manuscript is all the better for it.

So many other books are filled with dire warnings how hard it is to get your novel ever published and how there are thousand things you can (and probably will) get wrong. Not this one, it tells you to just keep on writing because that's the only way you'll get better.

A Little Dated and Long Winded
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Review Date: 2008-04-24
Techniques of the Selling Writer by Dwilight V. Swain contains some gems, but you must mine deep to find them. Written several decades prior, it shows its age. While one could get away with prose that takes forever to get to the point, the modern reader and writer expects a faster delivery.

Yes, this is a symptom of the microwave society. I don't excuse it, but accept it. Unfortunately, this book could lead new writers to believe bloated prose is still acceptable in publication today.

Believe me: It's not.

I still recommend buying the book as the wisdom is timeless, but the technique in delivery is not.

Realize what you are getting. You might--as I did--thumb through some passages that go on and on before that single sentence makes the point near the end.

That one sentence is still worth it, if you don't mind the mining.

Wolfe

One of the best books on writing commercial fiction
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Review Date: 2008-03-16
I've read this book a few times now and I find it one of the most helpful in crafting genre fiction. Swain gives a writer the nuts and bolts for building scenes and increasing tension to a satisfying conclusion for the reader. If you want to get published, I highly recommend reading this book and studying it!

The Best "How to Write" ever written!
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Review Date: 2008-03-14
While the price of this book is steep, it is worth every cent!
It is the best book about writing that I have ever read.
I learned more from this one book than from the combined hundreds of other books on writing I own.
If you have the write stuff, this one book should be on your desk!
John Bradt

A must...
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Review Date: 2008-03-05
If there is one book a writer just got to read, this is the one...

Tom Aardahl
Published writer

Fiction
Wonder's First Race (Thoroughbred Series #3)
Published in Mass Market Paperback by HarperCollins (1991-10-15)
Author: Joanna Campbell
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Good read
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Review Date: 2008-05-30
Following right where they left off, Wonder is flying through her training once she gets the right handling. I think alot of horse people out there can relate with ashleigh about the frustration of watching someone push a horse to far but we can also relate with her never giving up. Good read, reccomend for any horse lover.

Absolutely one of the best TB books ever! Help SAVE TB!!
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Review Date: 2005-01-29
"Townsend Prince and Mercy Man are running nose and nose, straining to catch her. What a finish! Can the filly do it? Can this courageous little filly hold them off? They're coming down to the wire..."

In book three Ashleigh, Wonder, and Charlie are headed for the biggest race of their lives. The Kentucky Derby. This book is one of my favorites because of the way that it is written. We learn so much about Brad Townsend, and I can't help but glare when I think about him. Campbell does an amazing job creating a "villain" that has depth and character. You really grow to hate Brad! We also get glimpses of characters that will play a major role in the future of Thoroughbred, like Mike Reese.

Probably the best asset of this book is the race scenes. Each race that is written seems to come alive to me as I read. I can picture Wonder and Jilly struggling down the stretch in the Blue Grass trying valiantly to hang on to the lead under the onslaught of Townsend Prince and Silverghost. The climax of this book is the Kentucky Derby where Wonder is pitted against the greatest colts in the country and her own half brother Prince (who is Brad's colt). This race is one of my most favorite in the whole series. I was on the edge on my seat as I read. I couldn't seem to turn the pages fast enough! Every time I read this book I get excited all over again.

Wonder's First Race is one of the finest books in the series. When I think of how great this series is, I'm terribly saddened at the fact that Harper Collins is planning to end the series after #72. Unfortunately the faithful readers will not get the chance to experience another race as gripping as Wonder's Derby if the books will no longer be printed...Please reconsider Harper! If you want to HELP SAVE THE THOROUGHBRED SERIES, go to www.whitebrookfarm.com to find out more. Please help keep the spirit of Ashleigh and Wonder alive! PLEASE SAVE THOROUGHBRED!!

Go Wonder Go
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Review Date: 2005-01-22
In this book Wonder is injured by Brad Townsend during an icy workout.Her Derby chances go downhill when she is injured. Ashleigh meets Mike Reese and he asks her on a date.Wonder and Prince make it to the Derby. Wonder makes it to the wire first with Jilly Gordon up. Unfortunately this most remarkable series is coming to an end at #72 Legacy's Gift.Please go to www.whitebrookfarm.com to find out how you can help to try to save this beloved series.

Don't Let This End!!!!
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Review Date: 2005-01-18
Wonder's First Race is one of my favorite TB books. I'm 20 and I still get a kick out of reading them.
This is where things start to get exciting. We see Wonder race for the first time, Ashliegh start to show an interest in boys and much much more!
Please, please don't end this series! The new books are not as good as this one was, but I still read them.

Essential reading for any young equestrian, don't let it end
Helpful Votes: 1 out of 1 total.
Review Date: 2005-02-17
This was the first Thoroughbred book I ever read and still holds a special place in my heart. This is a truly well-written book that I have enjoyed upon many re-readings. Unfortunately, Harper Collins has decided to end the series abruptly after #72. With such a dedicated following and online fan base with members from all over the world, this is a classic and beloved series that has inspired many people and provided horse fans with vicarious thrills and adventure. Ashleigh saved Wonder, now it's up to you to help save Thoroughbred. [...].

Fiction
Treason (Navy Justice, Book 1)
Published in Paperback by Zondervan (2005-04-01)
Author: Don Brown
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Intense with Great Character Development
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Review Date: 2008-07-26
Don Brown's Treason is an intense, fascinating read from start to finish! I loved Zack Brewer and Diane Colcernian. They are young, dashing, beautiful and fascinating characters. One of the better novels I've read in a while.

Sizzling!
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Review Date: 2008-07-19
Murder, treason, espionage, and radical Islamic infiltration of the U.S. Chaplain Navy Corps provide the background for Don Brown's Treason. Against this background, Don Brown delivers the most sizzling courtroom scenes I have ever read! NAVY JAG Officer Zack Brewer bursts on the scene as America's new legal action thriller hero! Must read for legal lovers.

Great Blend of Tension, Romance and Legal Thriller
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Review Date: 2008-07-17
Treason is a great blend of tension, romance and a legal thriller all in one. I absolutely loved it. I agree that the first chapter started a little slow, but wow did it take off! Super job by Don Brown! Great beach read!

Super Courtroom Scenes!
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Review Date: 2008-07-15
Some of the other readers have commented that this novel has the most exhilarating courtroom scenes of any legal thriller out there. I read this book and couldn't put it down. I agree.

"David vs Goliath" Courtroom Drama
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Review Date: 2008-07-06
Treason is a brilliant legal thriller branded by the publisher as "David vs. Goliath in the Court-Martial of the Century!"

And brilliant break-out novelist Don Brown does not disappoint, pitting a young U.S. Navy JAG Officer, Zack Brewer against the world's greatest and most seasoned defense lawyer, Wells Levinson. It appears to be a mismatch, as Brewer, just three years out of law school, takes on the overpowering Levinson in an internationally publicized trial in which three U.S. Navy Chaplains, all Islamic, are prosecuted for murder, conspiracy to commit murder, and Treason. For fans of the movie A Few Good Men or the TV Series, JAG, Treason will knock your socks off. Pop some corn in the microwave, pour yourself some coke, and enjoy the ride!

Fiction
Trifecta of Suspense
Published in Hardcover by AuthorHouse (2004-07-22)
Author: G. Novitsky
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Would give it ZERO stars if I could!
Helpful Votes: 0 out of 1 total.
Review Date: 2007-07-17
This is a classic case of the author's many friends/family members writing great reviews for him/her. The book is TERRIBLE. First of all you can barely get through a page without finding several spelling and grammar errors. The stories are supposed to be adult-themed (foul language and all) but are obviously written by a child. The thinking and facts do not make sense and are not researched. This is like a collection of some high school kid's short stories. I myself quit school without finishing but stayed long enough to at least learn proper grammar and how to spell! I feel terrible, I had my mother buy this because of the great reviews. She paid $25 for a joke. The positive ratings have been "spammed".

Something fishy...
Helpful Votes: 1 out of 3 total.
Review Date: 2007-06-26
There's something fishy about all customer reviews on this book. They all give 5 stars and all have 100% review-reader agreement that the reviews are useful...
Having read Trifecta of Suspense I liked it very much at first but then I grew tired of the characters.... The author does not make them believeable and while that's OK at first it ends up being like reading essays by a middle school student... I am a scientist myself so the desription of the scientist in "Sheep" is just downright laughable. Usually authors do a little research first above how there characters work, live etc.
That's just one example so if i take it as an artistic touch instead of plain lack of knowledge of what real people in the real world are doing, then OK, it's interesting...

TRIFECTA
Helpful Votes: 32 out of 32 total.
Review Date: 2005-06-02
Very gripping stories, well told. Makes you feel as if you are in the story. Character development was great. Meaningful and memorable cast.
Recommend this one highly.

NOVITSKY out did himself with SHEEP and THE CEMETERY FENCE. Putting them both in here with THE MISTY DINS, put this book over the top.
The Honeymooners quotes in THE CEMETERY FENCE were a nice touch.

Clearly a new and rising talent.

fabulous mixture
Helpful Votes: 32 out of 32 total.
Review Date: 2005-04-12
Amusing, creepy, scary, and romantic. Not that I look for romance in a book. My wife wanted to make sure I mentioned that. It was romantic in a manly way though. The stories were entertaining in many different ways. That is what I liked most about it. They also tie in so perfectly in the end. They make you feel like getting to the finish is worthwhile instead of being left hanging. The geography lesson of the US was a plus. I've never been to NY or some of the other states mentioned but now I feel like I know them a little bit better. I never heard of Radcliff Kentucky until reading the misty dins. All in all I would recommend trifecta of suspense to anyone looking for a mystery novel. It is actually three in one.

Looking forward to more by this author.

EXPLOSION
Helpful Votes: 8 out of 8 total.
Review Date: 2005-09-16
THE BOOK TAKES OFF LIKE AN EXPLOSION - I SEE A CULT LIKE FOLLOWING

Fiction
A Twisted Tale of Karma
Published in Paperback by Melodrama Publishing (2005-07-01)
Author: Amaleka G. Mccall
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Good book
Helpful Votes: 0 out of 0 total.
Review Date: 2007-12-21
I really think that the author of this book trully out done herself a great book. I can not wait to read more from this auhor.

DON'T JUDGE A BOOK BY IT'S COVER!!!!!
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Review Date: 2007-07-24
Looking at the cover of this book, I wasn't eager to read this book. Once I started to read it, it was soo good! I read this book in one day! Please go out and get this book, you will not be disappointed!

Don't sleep on a cheezy cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review Date: 2007-05-26
For starters lemme start out by saying that i slept on this book for 2 yrs b/c honestly if that is supposed to be a picture of Milton, the main characters boyfriend, 1 he aint cute and 2 he look like a dyke not even a man. And too me the cover is just cheezy looking, however this book was excellent. At first i couldn't see how this book could have so many twists and so much evil could happen to the main character but i must say all in all she overcame everything and good things come to those who wait. I understand Milton was abused but what he did to Myra was unforgivable and it was sad but things like this really happen. If you sleeping on the cover like i was don't immediately pick this up and read now. It kind of reminds me of "Harlem girl lost" by Treasure E. Blue just the way the turn of events took place. Go buy and read!!!!!!!!!!!!

This Grass Ain't Greener...
Helpful Votes: 1 out of 2 total.
Review Date: 2006-06-14
Such hardknock lives but I always like happy endings....this was my firs AG McCall read...she went back and forth but she kept it all under control...seems like everything got a little rushed in the end... it will keep you company because you won't want to put it down...all in all I gave it 3 stars.....plus there's room for a sequel....I think....

TWISTED,TWISTED AND MORE TWISTED
Helpful Votes: 2 out of 2 total.
Review Date: 2006-08-11
I do not know what to say about this book. I don't think words would do it justice. This book is one of the best well put storys. IF YOU HAVEN'T READ IT, YOU ARE SURELY MISSING SOMETHIN!!!


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